My first poetry lol hope u would like it" the moong of the night" supérina lover

[simooben]

the moon of the night my thoughts come right
since i've seen ur face the whole of my life has changed
can u tell me when the place we going through

idont know what to do im just lost in ur love
what ever u do what u take our love will never break
my life without u is fake

when u put ur hands on mine i see the fears in my enemies eyes
and all i want is to make them die not even cry
cos ur love make's me a real man but a real one

OHh the moon of the night
can u just lead me to the run way with ur light
cos my nights turned days and my days turned night


i tried and i tried for ur smile i died
superina baby u can save my pride
u can be my life guide !!! =D:blushing:

when u gone i follow ur shadow
with u we can make this love grow
be my everything as i've been ur everything
love ya with my heart ! <3

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[Łøst Fłôwęr]

ohhhhhh my god that's sooooooo sweet i never seen a sweetest poetry like this before i can imagine how u can sing it on guitar that's would be so creative dude saprina is lucky girl to have u god bless u both she sent me msg from spain yesterday she is too kind girl i like her and when she will get to back after aid she has to c this topic hhhhh
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[simooben]

ohhhhhh my god that's sooooooo sweet i never seen a sweetest poetry like this before i can imagine how u can sing it on guitar that's would be so creative dude saprina is lucky girl to have u god bless u both she sent me msg from spain yesterday she is too kind girl i like her and when she will get to back after aid she has to c this topic hhhhh​

ohhhhh sweety thx alot for ur pass and i think no one else liked :scared:my own poetry lol i dont blame them i still amateur but its just the start u know what im talking about there is little girls in this world make u held the pen and write sth btw im very lazy lol hope u get what i ment exacty ​

 

[asma0105]

oooh it so sweet , que Dieu te garde ton superina , and i'm wating fort your new, you're always special

 

[simooben]

oooh it so sweet , que Dieu te garde ton superina , and i'm wating fort your new, you're always special

:scared:lol if u do beleive that ur pass was more sweetest :biggrin:xD my new is comming soon ... catch ya later
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[*amina*]

oh! it's very nice words ecpecially this sentence itried and i tried for your smile i died it affected on me verry much
by the way this girl is very lucku
i wish that your relationship never break up inchalah ​

 

[simooben]

thx that's so awesoooooooome

oh! it's very nice words ecpecially this sentence itried and i tried for your smile i died it affected on me verry much
by the way this girl is very lucku
i wish that your relationship never break up inchalah ​

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:scared: got nothing to say ur words touched me lol it made me think for a while for what i become cos u know how u feel when someone make's u do things for him and let do the ever rare things u dont do sometimes and btw im the lucky not her hehehe and about breaking up idnt think so cos u know i wanna just 7lal and allah supported that not like some girls who got dumped allways hahaha cos they didnt look for 7lal like idid and sabrina's did also u c she lived in spain and never dated anyone! :001_wub::001_wub: im so glad to c ur comment it made me:001_wub: smile for a while:biggrin: