WITH MY PEN : A STONE's SCREAM

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abdou27

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Howdy partners , as a first word in this great forum , i'll present you some words from my heart by my own pen
so please reply by telling me : what do you give me from 0 to 10

just one year ago *********** i saw you in the snow
i didn't know *************** who i was although
i said wow ! ! ​
is she a princess ***********or I'm just in a mess
is she snow -girl************or my mind is going to boil
will i say hello **************oh ! no , i can't do
I'll still waiting **************with impatience ,seeking
for a wide smile************or just a while
to talk with you *****************to just show you
how much i love you **********how much i need you

because i want you********** to stay by my side
so we can be one ***********and go out for a ride

starting with my sad past*********to future , which will be , with you

the best and forever honey ************our love certainly will last

i see you ,i don't see the rest **i don't care because you're the best

weather they did or said ******************be sure that you're ahead

oh girl !

i don't know, you're ignoring me ******** or you want ,to punish me
for my shy looks to your eyes *********or my true clear love

oh angel !

are all the lovers really tired *******or I'm just worried
i know that real love ****************is worth dying for
and I'm ready to do ****************to walk the wire for you
to die for you *********************to fight the world for you

whatever you say****** i don't want to lose you
so, be a friend or ********more than a friend for me
I've nothing to lose but you ******i can't survive without you

so don't make my heart a stone , because a stone's scream will be a noise for you , and i don't want to .


4u I'm , and I'll still




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good job men it is very good
i wishe to you the best in you life brother
thx​
 
thank you very much , i'm so happy to hear that from you
thank you
 
you are welcome brother​
 
Hello brother ..
first I wanna say welcome to you here ... as u'r New I wish you'll enjoy ur time with us ...
and for it's your first poem
Let me tell you that's really wow .........it's amazing
I really like it sOo much
so .......keep writing

waiting for your New
bye ... seE yOu Later


Greetings
 peace​
 
thanks for your great reply

i'll keep surely writing

see you in another poem
 
I like it these worlds
Continued to write​
 
wooow
nice poem bro
srsly i like it
and i give you 10/10 i love the words
especially this
i see you ,i don't see the rest **i don't care because you're the best
woow so nice
thanks bro for sharing your poem with us
and I'm waiting for next poem
take care of you
see you later
​
 
thank you for these great replies

thanks 1.000000000000000000000000000 time
 
hiiii

waw..so nice topic with so cute words and so deep meaning

mm.. :confused1: ..mm

what can i add

really..i like your topic

keep on bro

u make so great
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mmm.........mmmm

thanks kakozita

this is so pleasant from you

god , you're the most beneficent , the most merciful

please make us so better than ever ,
 
قال abdou27:
mmm.........mmmm

thanks kakozita

this is so pleasant from you

god , you're the most beneficent , the most merciful

please make us so better than ever ,
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thnx

u r welcome

ops.. :ohmy: ..ur mark..hh..i forgot

mm.. :confused1: ..mm

i give u 8/10

gOOd job
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thanks i'll go up so
 
Thank you, my sister I saw in your signature -- to look him, God willing, God bless you greetings
 
hhhhh but i'm not a sister
i'm a brother

thanks for passing
 
don't worry , mistakes are too in our life , but the best thing is to apologize

thanks again for passing , and remember that you've not gave me the mark
from 0 to 10
 
27thank youabdou

أسمحلي خويا عبد الإله علي تاخر
 
ههه مشكور إسحاق يخي عجباتك
 
thank you

god bless you ​
 


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