my feelings in a poem

[white heart87]

hello every body...i hope that you'll like my poem..it's not perfect but it explains what a lover feels..​

Somtimes,i see the truth in your eyes..
I always ask my self,why do you have to show me other lies..
You did never know how much i loved you..
How i would like to be with you...
I was never waiting for that day...
When you left me here all alone and you're gone faraway...
Here and for the first time i felt a big pain...
I tried to hide it behind my eyes and under the rain...
I don't know how did i put you into my heart...
I thought that i'm happy with you but you thought that you're so smart...
To leave me and forget what i was giving you all the time...
The demon and you,were the same...
Sorry my heart,i was loosing time...
God forgive me for that mistake...
I'll always remember that what do you want for me,will be all ...what i'll take​

 

[om djawad]

it's really a nice poem
and amazing words
you are so soft honey
kisses​

 

[white heart87]

it's really a nice poem
and amazing words
you are so soft honey
kisses​

really thank's for your words sister..it's a big pleasure for me that you like it

take care for your self darling...kisses :sheer:​

 

[Black heart]

realy it's amazing words
however i hate love and the words that means love
but
i love it because u are the writer
hhhhh
i saw that u had
a great dreams
thx again ​

 

[white heart87]

realy it's amazing words
however i hate love and the words that means love
but
i love it because u are the writer
hhhhh
i saw that u had
a great dreams
thx again ​

oh my God,you really make me shy :shay:

darling don't hate love because it's the best feeling that the human been can ever have..
if you've been hurt once because of love,that does never mean that all the love is bad

thank's for passing on my subject darling..i love you all my friends​

 

[يسرى 2008]

really amazing words sister l love it soo much that's why l think that we haven't a love in this world it's just a lies and hurting​

 

[white heart87]

really amazing words sister l love it soo much that's why l think that we haven't a love in this world it's just a lies and hurting​

thank's a lot sister for passing on my words and it's a big pleasure for me that you like it..
yes may be the most of love kind are just lies but it's possible to find the true and the real one
thank's again dear sister and take care for your self​

 

[zahira92]

believe or not this poem express my feeling too thnx a lot baby take care of your self
​

 

[كابتن نامق]

nice poem

thanks

 

[white heart87]

believe or not this poem express my feeling too thnx a lot baby take care of your self
​

you're welcome dear sister..thank's for passing on my subject
take care for your self too :re_gards:​

 

[white heart87]

nice poem

thanks

i'm glad that you like my poem
you're welcome brother..thank's for passing on my subject :re_gards:​