check the mistake

[cute angel]

When I arrived to your home, I found the door closed.

 

[cute angel]

May be you mean at instead of to?

But I feel if heavy in here ​

 

[semmouna]

yes excellent cute angel
we say arrive at (place) not in or to
thnx deaaaaar

 

[semmouna]

your turn now
but where are the other members

 

[cute angel]

Hi Samouna

you know what I know we say I arrived to school and so on but when I found your I found it a little bit odd.Any way ,it means with arrive we must use at.Thanks a lot Sweety.

Ok my turn,it seems that it's our game sister^_^

where are the other members?????

Don't cry on some one which do not cry on you.​

 

[semmouna]

well
Don't cry for someone who doesn't cry for you

 

[cute angel]

hmmmmmmmm

to be honest I know that we use over not for ,and it's a kind of proverb this sentence.So weither for is correct or not,I don't know but over is.

so we say
Don't cry over someone who doesn't cry over you

Excellent work you got all the other mistakes
So your turn now.
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[semmouna]

aha good
i ll think abt a sentence

 

[semmouna]

well for ur previous sentence i thnik that the meaning played an important rule
nd so will do with my coming sentence

because of the bad teacher ,my brother droped off the school

 

[cute angel]

Because of the bad teacher,my brother dropped off the school?????
@_@

 

[semmouna]

oooook good
dropped
but still one mistake

 

[cute angel]

Because the teacher was bad,my brother dropped the school.
I think the problem with off?????

 

[semmouna]

yes it is not off

 

[semmouna]

so ur right dear
we have 3 phrasal verbs
drop in=visit...
drop off=fall asleep,deliver s1 or sth...
drop out =leave
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[semmouna]

so the correction of the sentence is
Because of the bad teacher, my brother dropped out the school

 

[cute angel]

Very good information

thanks a bunch^_^​

 

[cute angel]

My sentence

when leila reads the book,the door knocks.​

 

[semmouna]

. leila was reading the book when the door knocked

 

[cute angel]

excellent work my dear.But we can replace when with while .

Your turn now.​

 

[semmouna]

did u remember the first day you get in school
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