WHAT IS THE POINT

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usually i use my brother's one
ki tekhla bark hhhh​

Ah okey .. ur brother is a generous men to give u his pc
So give me an idea to start a story or maybe a title or something
So I will start nd u continue in the next comment then ur turn nd mine until finish the story
Ur opinion ....​

 

[Only me]

Ah okey .. ur brother is a generous men to give u his pc
So give me an idea to start a story or maybe a title or something
So I will start nd u continue in the next comment then ur turn nd mine until finish the story
Ur opinion ....
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(عاينتو الله يعطيك الخير راه غلقلي السيت تاع اللمة)
concerning ur idea i liked it, start with an idea or an event then i'll add something
hope it'll work​

 

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(عاينتو الله يعطيك الخير راه غلقلي السيت تاع اللمة)
concerning ur idea i liked it, start with an idea or an event then i'll add something
hope it'll work​

Okey marcossa but I d'ont konw ur head yabs like that hhh
Aha what do u think abt story talking abt mousse live in house decide to change his life nd live in the jungle then his ambition grow up more nd more nd he wanna be the king of the jungle...
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Okey marcossa but I d'ont konw ur head yabs like that hhh
Aha what do u think abt story talking abt mousse live in house decide to change his life nd live in the jungle then his ambition grow up more nd more nd he wanna be the king of the jungle...
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wooow it seems amazing
just start
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wooow it seems amazing
just start
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In a sidecountry live an old women alone in a small cotage
nd in the corner of this cotage live a familly of mice ...
Once day the grandmother of the mice road a story abt the jungle nd the animls lives there nd the lion the king of the wood ... Nd the little mousse listen currfully to every word the grandmother said ....​

 

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In a sidecountry live an old women alone in a small cotage
nd in the corner of this cotage live a familly of mice ...
Once day the grandmother of the mice road a story abt the jungle nd the animls lives there nd the lion the king of the wood ... Nd the little mousse listen currfully to every word the grandmother said ....​

emmm Phytha i wanna say something
i didn't like the way of telling ur story
we wanna add some suspense , for example we can start with the little mouse listening to his or her GrandMa or starting with the story itself , then we say that the story is told by the mouse'GrandMa
what do u think Pytha ???​

 

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emmm Phytha i wanna say something
i didn't like the way of telling ur story
we wanna add some suspense , for example we can start with the little mouse listening to his or her GrandMa or starting with the story itself , then we say that the story is told by the mouse'GrandMa
what do u think Pytha ???​

Ok I agree with u marcossa
Let's do it again
But now u have an idea abt the story so go ahead ..​

 

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Ok I agree with u marcossa
Let's do it again
But now u have an idea abt the story so go ahead ..
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emmm m not that good in telling stories , my imagination is too limited
i need long time to produce an idea 3aaatla hhhh
tomorrow nchlh i'll try to write something , n u do the same then we'll combine the 2 ideas ​

 

[Only me]

الترونسبور ( الشوفور والا الروسوفور والا الشعب الفرفور)

 

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emmm m not that good in telling stories , my imagination is too limited
i need long time to produce an idea 3aaatla hhhh
tomorrow nchlh i'll try to write something , n u do the same then we'll combine the 2 ideas ​

I told u that ur head yaaaaaabs really u are M'sileaaaan -______- ok take ur time nd tomorrow nchlh we will see wht we will do marcossa

 

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I told u that ur head yaaaaaabs really u are M'sileaaaan -______- ok take ur time nd tomorrow nchlh we will see wht we will do marcossa

m Bordj-M'silean n proud but my head is not Yabess :p
i hv to leave now , sweet dreams Pytha ​

 

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m Bordj-M'silean n proud but my head is not Yabess :p
i hv to leave now , sweet dreams Pytha ​

So yaaaaaabes
Okey marcossa I am so happy to talk to u ... Gd night​

 

[lahcine]

To be happy in you own way

 

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So yaaaaaabes
Okey marcossa I am so happy to talk to u ... Gd night
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Me too wallah i feel that i know u well
but u r always late ​

 

[Only me]

So yaaaaaabes
Okey marcossa I am so happy to talk to u ... Gd night
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i hv tried to write something
hope u'll like it
Once upon a time, a Lion was living in a large, harsh, and a scary forest. He was not that powerful to rule that jungle, but he was powered by the endless
number of the different kinds of ravenous animals who were living only for his majesty.,,,,,, The mouse'GrandMa said with a whispering voice.
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Me too wallah i feel that i know u well
but u r always late ​

Yeah really u know me well it's the same feeking .. Maybe u know me
I am so late cuz my processor is verry old I have to buy a new one -_-​

 

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i hv tried to write something
hope u'll like it
Once upon a time, a Lion was living in a large, harsh, and a scary forest. He was not that powerful to rule that jungle, but he was powered by the endless
number of the different kinds of ravenous animals who were living only for his majesty.,,,,,, The mouse'GrandMa said with a whispering voice.
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She said "listen my dears I wanna tell u a secret ur grandfather before he died he wanna to be the king of the jungle instead the lion nd he fight for his dream till he die ... He always say we can do it cuz all the animals see all the mice are weak Cuz we are very small but this point it's our powerful
Now go to sleep .. It's so late the grandmother's mousse said

Yeaaaaah I like what u wrote marcossa please go ahead with my simple words​

 

[Only me]

Yeaaaaah I like what u wrote marcossa please go ahead with my simple words

Hi Pytha , hope u r fine
i know u'll hate me , cuz my head is really yabess as u said ,, i wanna correct some mistakes before adding any event
:pdon't be angry plzzz​

 

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he said "listen my dears I wanna tell u a secret ur grandfather before he died he wanna to be the king of the jungle instead the lion nd he fight for his dream till he die ... He always say we can do it cuz all the animals see all the mice are weak Cuz we are very small but this point it's our powerful
Now go to sleep .. It's so late the grandmother's mousse said

my dear not dears
want to not wanna
don't say before he died, we directly use the simple past
instead of the
fought not fight
until is better than till
until the last day in his life
he was always saying or he believed that
as not are
cuz cuz avoid repetion
but this is point is the source of our power
too not so
the mouse' grandmother not the opposite

Pytha u hv to think in English not in arabic, and u hv to write with more details and more expressions to strenghen ur thoughts
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Hi Pytha , hope u r fine
i know u'll hate me , cuz my head is really yabess as u said ,, i wanna correct some mistakes before adding any event
:pdon't be angry plzzz​

Gd morning marcossa .. I am gd wht abt u
Hhh finally u agree with me abt ur head
No don't say that again I will never hate but I am thankfull cuz u guide me to the right path by teaching me nd I am comfortable with u .. So I wish that u will not be boored cuz of me
THAAAANK U​